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The cliche of heartbreak has no cure,
What treacheries lie from here is unsure.

This cruel feeling of emptiness is present,
And all of the world is mine to resent.

Time pasts and wounds are profound guides,
Yet true desires cower and happiness hides.

Waiting for the better makes me restless,
But hoping for it is all the more useless.
:iconjaggedlittlepill:
Wow this poem really sucks. I can't even write anymore. Whatever.
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:iconlick-a-lighter5:
no...your confusing your writing with yourself...j/k j/k! lmao! :D
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:icon5centho4life:
i like it alot, jus like your mom!
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:iconxsedatedx:
You jerkface, what do you mean crap!? Joo Rocks!

Clliche is a sweet word. Like me. Cause im a sweet awesome. I like it alot too >:O
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:iconjaggedlittlepill:
thankies buu :w00t: lmao youre a "sweet awesome", eh?
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:iconxsedatedx:
Yeah, a sweet awesome. You know those awesomes, theyre sweet.
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:iconlick-a-lighter5:
this is how i feel! :( because every guy i seem to care about likes to leave me in some way-be it moving or saying they suddenly hate me!!! great stuff! *falsely smiling*
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:icondreamer-of-love:
I don't think it sucks at all...I like it...a lot...
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